Welcome to another blog hop. Today’s topic is:
How do you avoid giving readers TMI (too much information)about a character? How do you decide what to share about a story’s characters?
My preference is not to give too much information at all, and let readers work character traits out for themselves. I eventually based this on two things; my own reading preferences and also feedback I had from an agent at the start of my writing career. I was all for putting every minute detail down on the page, but thanks to an agent who asked for the manuscript of ‘Mind Games‘, I learned that it’s best to be sparing so that readers can use their imaginations and form their own mental pictures of my characters.
I’m now of the opinion that readers enjoy coming to their own conclusions as to what a character looks like or what personality traits they have, but I do add a soupçon of information here and there to give the bare bones. Less is more, so they say, coupled with actions, which can say so much about a character too.
I have also learned not to give too much background information all in one go, and instead of an info dump add bits and pieces of background throughout the story as I go along. It’s a kindness to readers, lol!
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Information dumps are easy to write but drive readers away.
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Yes indeed.
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Some things are better left to the imagination. 🙂 x
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I agree. x
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Follow that thought into your cover design! Way too many authors give up way too much. They do the same to automobile interiors, interior and exterior spaces. Drip feed is also a good method for the top couple of characters. A quick paint job of supporting cast is okay by me because we know BAM who the secretary, prosecutor, counterman are. Even as John D MacDonald and his era of the perfect three words. A thick set, oily, dark-haired man in (clothing description optional) grease-stained coveralls. She’s got lovely long red hair, a surfboard figure and a laugh like glass breaking. Yeah, I’ve met her…
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Or you wish you had, lol…
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I am terrible at describing what a character looks like – so that’s one spot where I am safe about an info dump. I prefer to let the reader decide the character’s appearance.
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So do I.
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You can’t beat a bit of mystery and leaving the reader to make their own assumptions.
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Indeed.
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In my serials, I tend to go for physical descriptions so that readers can imagine the character. Bceause of the serial format, I also only ‘drip-feed’ additional information about the characters over 20-30 episodes. That said, I have read novels where the author gives a lot of background information, and still enjoyed them.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Drip feeding is good, I think.
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Completely agree!!
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Thanks Darlene for your comment.
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